doc: improved wording in some places

Avoid "mountpoint mounted" (word repetition),
"queriable" (no match in m-w.com and dict.cc).
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Jan Engelhardt 2015-10-26 16:10:17 +01:00 committed by Daniel Mack
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and restrictions systemd makes on the file system and restrictions systemd makes on the file system
hierarchy.</para> hierarchy.</para>
<para>Many of the paths described here are queriable <para>Many of the paths described here can be queried
with the with the
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd-path</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry> <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd-path</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
tool.</para> tool.</para>

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used to escape and to undo escaping of strings.</para> used to escape and to undo escaping of strings.</para>
<para>The command takes any number of strings on the command line, <para>The command takes any number of strings on the command line,
and will process them individually, one after the other. It will and will process them individually, one after another. It will
output them separated by spaces to stdout.</para> output them separated by spaces to stdout.</para>
<para>By default, this command will escape the strings passed, <para>By default, this command will escape the strings passed,

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<option>yes</option>, full volatile mode is enabled. This <option>yes</option>, full volatile mode is enabled. This
means the root directory is mounted as a mostly unpopulated means the root directory is mounted as a mostly unpopulated
<literal>tmpfs</literal> instance, and <literal>tmpfs</literal> instance, and
<filename>/usr</filename> from the OS tree is mounted into it, <filename>/usr</filename> from the OS tree is mounted into it
read-only (the system thus starts up with read-only OS in read-only mode (the system thus starts up with read-only OS
resources, but pristine state and configuration, any changes resources, but pristine state and configuration, any changes
to the either are lost on shutdown). When the mode parameter to the either are lost on shutdown). When the mode parameter
is specified as <option>state</option>, the OS tree is is specified as <option>state</option>, the OS tree is

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<para><command>systemd-path</command> may be used to query system <para><command>systemd-path</command> may be used to query system
and user paths. The tool makes many of the paths described in and user paths. The tool makes many of the paths described in
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>file-hierarchy</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum></citerefentry> <citerefentry><refentrytitle>file-hierarchy</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum></citerefentry>
queriable.</para> available for querying.</para>
<para>When invoked without arguments, a list of known paths and <para>When invoked without arguments, a list of known paths and
their current values is shown. When at least one argument is their current values is shown. When at least one argument is

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<varlistentry> <varlistentry>
<term><varname>m</varname></term> <term><varname>m</varname></term>
<listitem><para>Add a user to a group. If the user or group <listitem><para>Add a user to a group. If the user or group
are not existing yet, they will be implicitly do not exist yet, they will be implicitly
created.</para></listitem> created.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry> </varlistentry>