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man: reword some sentences with umbiguous subjects

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A sencence like "The system manager does, a, b, c, which is really d, and e.",
it is generally understood that the manager also does "e". This can be
quite confusing if the manager cannot do "e", in our case unmount the file
system on which it is sitting.

Similary, we cannot "fall back to x if it is missing", since "it" in that
sentence means "x".
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Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek 2024-09-23 11:45:25 +02:00
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necessary file systems and spawning all configured services.</para>
<para>On shutdown, the system manager stops all services, unmounts all non-busy file systems (detaching
the storage technologies backing them), and then (optionally) jumps into the exitrd, which is backed by
tmpfs, and unmounts/detaches the remaining file systems, including the real root. As a last step,
the system is powered down.</para>
the storage technologies backing them), and then (optionally) jumps into the exitrd. The exitrd is backed
by tmpfs and unmounts/detaches the remaining file systems, including the real root. As a last step, the
system is powered down.</para>
<para>Additional information about the system boot process may be
found in

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man/os-release.xml
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precedence over <filename>/usr/lib/os-release</filename>.
Applications should check for the former, and exclusively use its
data if it exists, and only fall back to
<filename>/usr/lib/os-release</filename> if it is missing.
Applications should not read data from both files at the same
time. <filename>/usr/lib/os-release</filename> is the recommended
<filename>/usr/lib/os-release</filename> if that is missing.
Applications should not combine the data from both files.
<filename>/usr/lib/os-release</filename> is the recommended
place to store OS release information as part of vendor trees.
<filename>/etc/os-release</filename> should be a relative symlink
to <filename>/usr/lib/os-release</filename>, to provide